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    Mattayus09
    Member

    Hi everyone,

    First of all, I’d like to thank everyone for the website revision that you’d suggest to my casino website. Since I applied those needed, may I ask what is your suggestion to my website for the second time around?

    http://www.casinoblazers.com

    This site now has many contents, I’m inviting every casino player online to submit blogs to our website and post it in our site. Need feedback about this.

    Thanks
    Nino

    #826396
    TESTjohnTEST
    Member

    Hi Nino,
    I like the look and feel of your site.

    I do have some comments for you;
    – it is very clear to me that you have wrote the blogs yourself under different names. It is too much, with only one day apart, and all in the same style. To me as a visitor this comes unreliable. I understand you wanna give it a head start already, but try to mix it up some more
    – Both with blog and promotions, i would suggest a ‘read more’ button at the end of the text. It is not clear right away that people can click on the header of that post entry.
    – I understand you want self filling content, but how do you want the right people driven to your site, the ones that are willing to post something? You should look for keyword phrases that attract those people first. Maybe people who look for reviews can be willing to post something about a casino for example, but they will never find your site now.

    Hope it is of any help,

    Paul

    #826397
    Mattayus09
    Member

    Hi Paul,

    Thank you so much for the comments that you gave. Can I ask what do you mean by mix up some more?

    #826398
    TESTjohnTEST
    Member

    I mean; make it look less like it has all been written by one person under different names.
    It is not a big issue, maybe other visitors do not see it, just to me it was clear.
    If other people see it, they will not trust your site as much.

    Maybe you can add some titles in one of the blog entries, or make one with just one link on the buttom.
    Also the links are all going to your own pages, (and then sent to the casino) which also shows it was someone from the site itself to make the blog entry. Some people will be fooled with this, but others dont, and you will lose those forever. They will not come back very soon.

    #826425
    Mattayus09
    Member

    Okay now I understand what you mean. Thank you so much for the suggestions….

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