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Need someone to critique my new site please.

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    Anonymous
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    Hi everyone this is also my first post at CAP and was wondering what you all thought of my gambling site http://www.knowwhentohold.com this is my first website of any kind, it’s a lot harder then I thought but I hope I am on the right track it’s only been up about a month. I would love to hear any comments and constructive criticism is welcome. Being this is my first post I also wanted to give credit for a poker article I used from “ladyholdem” in the content page at CAP, I really liked it even though I am not really a poker fan myself, just wanted to say thanks for letting me use it. Thanks, Jason

    #685621
    Anonymous
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    Hi Jason… Your site is nice i quite like it alot but there are alot of things that you can do diffrent and change. 1st of all i dont like the idea of the blog on the homepage. it should be used to give the visitors as much information as possible about your site. 2nd.. you dont have much to offer to the visitors your forum only has one category and no members.. and there are no articles or anything so i think that maybe add a section for articles and increase the forum categorys. other than that it is very nice looking and not crowded with banners. great job and good luck with your site.

    #685623
    Anonymous
    Inactive

    Thanks for your comments-poppinpoker I do appreciate your time, I was wondering as far as getting articles I have just been so afraid of copying someone elses work, do you know of any reputable places that will write good credible content for a decent price? I really want everything to look very proffesional and I am not the best at putting my mouth on paper to the point where other people are really interested in reading it. As far as the forum goes I was going to see how many people were interested in using it, I was going to just keep just a few categories untill it got bigger and needed more sections but after you said something about it, I also agree it would at least look better with some more sections. Once again I am grateful for your time. Thanks, Jason

    #685625
    Anonymous
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    Hey, No problem thats what this forum is here for :) as far as articles i play poker semi-pro i would be willing to write as many poker artilcles as you want just tell me what you want when you want it by and how much you are willing to pay!

    #685626
    Anonymous
    Inactive

    That sounds like a great idea do you have any sample articles by any chance? Wanna shoot me a ballpark figure to start with for writing an article? I would be interested in doing something like a weekly or monthly article later on if I liked the content. Thanks, Jason

    #685627
    Anonymous
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    hey, I will send you an article on bankroll management by email soon im almost done it.. i was origannly working on it for a big site but someone beat me to it lol

    #685628
    Anonymous
    Inactive

    sent it to u in an email! u are free to use that on your site. and if u need to contact me again u can hit me by email or

    msn: poppinpoker@hotmail.com
    YIM: poppinpkr

    #685629
    Anonymous
    Inactive

    Cool sounds good i’ll be looking forward to it. Does anyone else have any comments about my site?

    #685631
    Anonymous
    Inactive

    Hey just checked my email but nothing was sent, try sending it to my other address DaytonaOnBoosT@hotmail.com thanks!

    #685636
    Anonymous
    Inactive

    Well first I will say it looks great. I like sites that have content stand out they often better perform in the SE than sites with a bunch of internal and external links.

    I encountered some gramical errors and spelling mistakes on your front page. As follows according to the English Language Dictionary:

    adavantages> advantages

    experiance> experience

    gamlbing> gambling

    waisting> wasting

    bonuse> bonus

    Comped> compted

    Not sure about the following:

    videopoker or video poker

    highroller or high roller

    mcdonalds or Mc Donalds’s, McDonald’s

    Your browser support is good only 13 conflicts which is average. There is one that conflicts with every browser on line 21.

    I could not find a page title in you source. The page decription really lacks so do the keywords, this is your home page, the most important page. But that’s all the time I have. In general I like it, and once optimized it will pass many competitors. greek39

    #685637
    Anonymous
    Inactive

    Thank you Greek I appreciate the time you spent I can’t believe I had all of those typo’s in it hehe

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